Spring green eyes, a trademark
the passive frown she holds
claims all takers
after three weeks in therapy
her answers are getting vague
apparently
or perhaps it's the questions
lulling her into lies
I saw her in the hall today
this corridor of shame
where a head held high threatens
and somehow a smile, confesses truth
I asked if she felt like smoking with me
you know, outside
where light has a color
and sounds refute sterility
but she couldn't answer right then
as the first pill of the day had her
in my ignorance, I smiled and said
nothing, yet she had heard enough
from me
and I watched her pass
washing the walls with her palms
each tile an important tone
a texture only she could feel
I wanted her to turn back
but my role call was next
and I had a story to design
for the smiles that love to listen
between coffee breaks and paperwork
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nice story telling...interesting use of the white space as well...i felt a bit sad that she was that sedated honestly...yikes...
ReplyDeleteThank Brian...the hold keeps 'em quiet and "they" like it that way
ReplyDeletePeace
heck..you're back with your awesome writing d. - this is a tough story..shivers at the end for those, who don't really think they're people, just stories between their daily routine..
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia..."just stories"
ReplyDeleteI agree with Brian.. you paint such a vivid picture of her and the :blank space" she inhabits, makes me want to rescue her..
ReplyDeletea very fine piece of Po!!
thanks Lynne...your words matter
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