Saturday, November 19, 2011

how hip were we



the message died
in cloudy mornings, soiled sofas
group hugs explaining nothing
and beating drums went silent

...reinforcements never arrived
and we burned another notion
popped another dream
injected more concepts
swallowing the uncool aid

so we chanted Peace
while fucking our friends minds
why couldn't we believe ourselves
what if the loner stoner was heard
and the rallies didn't melt in our hands

ok, we were right
and now we're what...
wrong?
or simply victims of last night's party

look in the ashtrays
under the tables
perhaps the tea leaves can tell us
that bong water won't float hope

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rd051811

9 comments:

  1. Lot's of good stuff in this poem. The last stanza and last line particularly are awesome.
    "that bong water won't float hope"

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  2. Thanks ...perhaps "we" will rise again

    Peace

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  3. It seems when people turned from weed to crack and such, hopes did, dreams got mangled and we march around in circles..

    There is much to like about this poem and it should be included in you know what..

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  5. we burnt up hope...I agree to your last thought

    Peace

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  6. dude...bong water smell never comes out of carpet either...the uncool aid...nice...

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  7. ewww that smell....

    thanks Brian

    Peace

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  8. Peace and love man, and all that! Where did we go wrong who stole the answer??

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