the message died
in cloudy mornings, soiled sofas
group hugs explaining nothing
and beating drums went silent
...reinforcements never arrived
and we burned another notion
popped another dream
injected more concepts
swallowing the uncool aid
so we chanted Peace
while fucking our friends minds
why couldn't we believe ourselves
what if the loner stoner was heard
and the rallies didn't melt in our hands
ok, we were right
and now we're what...
wrong?
or simply victims of last night's party
look in the ashtrays
under the tables
perhaps the tea leaves can tell us
that bong water won't float hope
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rd051811

Lot's of good stuff in this poem. The last stanza and last line particularly are awesome.
ReplyDelete"that bong water won't float hope"
Thanks ...perhaps "we" will rise again
ReplyDeletePeace
It seems when people turned from weed to crack and such, hopes did, dreams got mangled and we march around in circles..
ReplyDeleteThere is much to like about this poem and it should be included in you know what..
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ReplyDeletewe burnt up hope...I agree to your last thought
ReplyDeletePeace
dude...bong water smell never comes out of carpet either...the uncool aid...nice...
ReplyDeleteewww that smell....
ReplyDeletethanks Brian
Peace
Peace and love man, and all that! Where did we go wrong who stole the answer??
ReplyDeletethanks Willow
ReplyDeletePeace